I can tell you put thought into deciding your top ten bucket list items. You had an interesting discussion in your presentation about why you would pick each one. Your citation page was well done. These are your strengths. Your weaknesses include your voice volume. It is not consistent. Sometimes I had to adjust my volume control to hear your presentation. Some of your pictures were out of place. Once when talking about wanting to plant a garden, you showed a picture of a beach scene. In addition, you showed a picture of a street sign for Rodeo Drive that belonged in your discussion of California rather than in your gardening section. And you were talking about California, yet displayed a map of Florida.87%
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ReplyDeleteand i liked how intersted in your topics and had lots of detail with each topic you did a really good job 94% -ally hansen
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DeleteI can tell you put thought into deciding your top ten bucket list items. You had an interesting discussion in your presentation about why you would pick each one. Your citation page was well done. These are your strengths. Your weaknesses include your voice volume. It is not consistent. Sometimes I had to adjust my volume control to hear your presentation. Some of your pictures were out of place. Once when talking about wanting to plant a garden, you showed a picture of a beach scene. In addition, you showed a picture of a street sign for Rodeo Drive that belonged in your discussion of California rather than in your gardening section. And you were talking about California, yet displayed a map of Florida.87%
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